想要写出一篇好的作文，步骤是至关重要的，就算是留学课程托福也是如此，下面分享托福的正确步骤。
Step 1:审题
知识点回顾之“绝对题”破题法：
破题法一： agree -- 证明绝对词存在的必要性或和合理性;
破题法一： disagree -- 世事无绝对;
1. 准确定义“the most important”
2. 时间线的完整度 -- during our lifetime
3. 定准论证核心 -- why
Step 2 :确定framework
Position: disagree
让步：
part 1: 承认合理性 -- some problems have been dramatically solved
Part 2: 弱化合理性 -- other problems have not been solved
反驳：reasons
1. humans’ flaws;
2. problems may keep worsening
Generally【适当添加副词缓和信息推进速度--注意节奏由慢到快】，there emerge an increasing number of vital problems in modern society. However, whether human can fix these troubles during our lifetime【主语从句】 is still an controversial issue. From my perspective, hardly can such problems be solved during that period【小短句也可设置语法点 -- 部分倒装句】.
Admittedly【不要忘记让步段信息词】, some matters have been dramatically solved. 【话题过于抽象时活用例证】 Take the illiteracy as an example. Owing to the economic growth, the government and private firms can provide sufficient resources to support the education. To be specific, they can set up some scholarships and student loans【贷款】 to children who cannot afford the tuition【限制性定语从句】. In that case, the educational degree has been drastically increased in some poverty-stricken【贫困的】 areas or underdeveloped countries. However【转折弱化其合理性】, the matters like poverty can not be settled【解决】 in our lives. Although people have struggled to eliminate the poverty for centuries【让步状语从句】, a great number of people cannot have access to the basic necessities even in some developed countries like America. That situation will continue in the subsequent【接下来的】 centuries【未解决的问题要提及“future”的情况--保证扣题度】
The first reason why those problems always exist is that human themselves are born with some imperfections【表语从句】. As is known, many of defects can never be overcome, so the problems, which are the result of the deficiencies[deficiency缺陷]【非限制性定语从句】, can also never be addressed. For instance, many entrepreneurs are driven by their greed so that they make profits at the expense of the environment, thus prompting【促使】 serious environmental troubles such as air pollution or soil degradation【现在分词做结果状语】. What’ more, if people want to alleviate【缓和】the problems【条件状语从句】, they should devote not only a large sum of money but also tremendous effort in the next few generations. Secondly, problems may keep worsening【考生可根据建议思路自行练习】..... |
