一句话10秒就能读完，这种方法完爆雅思阅读!可别在雅思口语考场上说错!想当雅思写作7分考鸭，就算你没时间都要看看这份官方资料!
同学们一定要知道雅思写作的学术性和正式性，不管在小作文还是大作文中都应如此。只有一种情况例外，那就是考G类雅思的同学在写小作文要求的书信类文章时，可以采用非正式的语言。不过关注掌柜的大部分同学应该考的都是A类，用词学术化这一点一定要注意，不然很有可能会影响最后的得分!
很多同学并没有意识到自己使用的是不适合用在雅思写作中的词，所以今天就替大家抓出来了这些词/词组!看完赶紧将它们从自己的写作词库中删去!有的词可能有多层含义，掌柜都给出了同义替换表达，同学们要注意根据不同的使用场景和需求来选择哦~
cheap
应改为：inexpensive
例句：CDs are a fairly inexpensive way to store data.
Right
应改为：correct/accurate/proper
例句：With proper training, most people can learn leadership skills.
wrong
应改为：incorrect/inaccurate/improper
例句：It's simply incorrect to say that tobacco advertising does not influence young people.
keep
应改为：retain/preserve/maintain
例句：A lot of information can be retained in computers.
kid/kids
应改为：child/children
例句：Young children are naturally curious about the world.
great/huge/amazing/awesome
应改为：
considerable/exceptional/influential/essential等
例句：Caring for elderly relatives requires considerable moral courage.
awful/ugly/horrible/useless
应改为：
inadequate/unacceptable/harmful/damaging/detrimental等
例句：Emissions from the factory are widely suspected of having a detrimental effect on health.
To get
“get”这个词在英文中可以说是最常见、最常用的单词之一了，它能表达许多意思，所以掌柜会根据不同的含义来给同学们介绍：
Ⅰ. 应改为：receive/obtain
to get permission
to obtain permission
to get an education
to receive an education
to get a master's degree
to receive/earn a master's degree
例句：
Information could be easily obtained from the internet.
Ⅱ. 应改为：purchase/acquire/earn
to get money to earn/to be paid
to get a salary
to earn/to receive a salary
例句：
It's not uncommon nowadays for women to earn more salaries than their husbands.
very/really/so/too
应改为：
可以直接去掉;或者改为“vastly/especially/immensely/excessively”
例句：
a very dangerous situation → a dangerous situation
Communication, management, and supervisory skills have vastly improved.
use
应改为：employ/utilize/consume
例句：
We must consider how best to utilize what resources we have.
fast
应改为：rapid/speedy/dramatic/sharp
例句：
The industry is experiencing rapid change.
go
应改为：depart/disappear/travel/proceed
例句：
The data proceeded slowly until 2000.
make
应改为：
create/form/manufacture/produce/build/develop等
例句：
On the other hand, millions of new jobs have also been created.
上面这些词都不建议同学们再在雅思写作中使用啦，同学可以对照着上面的内容，检查一下自己是否有用到过它们及时改正哦!这样也能更有利于同学们在词汇方面获得精进，更快拿到7分以上的分数! |
